Performance Three
For this I've used the same introduction however changed a lot with the chorus. I've made a more "Full" sounding chorus by making more percussion at the beginning of the chorus. Ive also implemented my idea of layering the vocals and increasing the pitch by +12. I still have introduce a middle verse which took a while to match as the tempo and timing was completely off, because I reloaded it in to Ableton again and had to match it up again with the tempo. After this I managed to have it match perfectly and synced some shakers and tambourines to it. I plan to just have this go straight back into the chorus.
Feedback:
Seb:
I like how you have structured your song as it has clear progression, I also like layered vocals as the high octave sound like an eco of the lower octave, to improve I would make the kick drum more punchy.
Lizzie:
I like the vocals and how you have transposed the vocals. I also like the harmonising on the vocals where you have mixed high and low vocals. The ending is good but maybe you could fade out. It definitely has more of a contrast to before and makes it more fuller.
Billy:
The beginning of the song is captivating and it flows well throughout the track so you are always focussing on a certain section, it all flows around one idea. The added sounds like the vinyl scratching in the background add lots of originality and also adds to the overall dynamic.
Shannon:
I really like the vinyl in the background and the way the harmonys join together
I really like it and if you were to add something it should be a old vintage electric piano free styling a mellow melody to add to that old vinyl sound in the background :) yeet
I agree with the feedback given as all is positive. I will only add what is recommended like Shannon thinking an Electric Piano should be added, Lizzie also said that the final part should be faded out. So these ideas will added to my performance to improve what I have currently done.
Feedback:
Seb:
I like how you have structured your song as it has clear progression, I also like layered vocals as the high octave sound like an eco of the lower octave, to improve I would make the kick drum more punchy.
Lizzie:
I like the vocals and how you have transposed the vocals. I also like the harmonising on the vocals where you have mixed high and low vocals. The ending is good but maybe you could fade out. It definitely has more of a contrast to before and makes it more fuller.
Billy:
The beginning of the song is captivating and it flows well throughout the track so you are always focussing on a certain section, it all flows around one idea. The added sounds like the vinyl scratching in the background add lots of originality and also adds to the overall dynamic.
Shannon:
I really like the vinyl in the background and the way the harmonys join together
I really like it and if you were to add something it should be a old vintage electric piano free styling a mellow melody to add to that old vinyl sound in the background :) yeet
I agree with the feedback given as all is positive. I will only add what is recommended like Shannon thinking an Electric Piano should be added, Lizzie also said that the final part should be faded out. So these ideas will added to my performance to improve what I have currently done.
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